*lays on the makeshift bed staring into the night*
*grins with blood dripping from his burnt away mouth* hehehe, I've got her now. *pours a bottle of alchohol on the side of her bedroom, pulls out a cigarette lighter and sets fire to the outside of Jane's bedroom*
*smells the smoke and walks out of the door of flames and grins at the morbid man* Do you really think fire is going to hurt me Jeffery? *pulls the knife from her hoodie pocket*
I have tried every other damn thing! JUST DIE!!! *charges at her with his knife in his hand with burning rage in his eyes*
*rolls her eyes sarcastically and slides out of the way slicing down his pant leg*
Agh! You little bitch! *slashes at her arm*
*the blade catches her sleeve to her hoodie and scratches* MY ONLY HOODIE?!? YOU ASS!! *charges him*
*splashes blood in her eyes with his knife*
*her tongue slithers out and licks her eyes as she slashes the front of his hoodie*
YOU WILL PAY!!! *charges at her and stabs her in the stomach*
*coughs up blood shoving him into the flames*
*he stands there as if enjoying the flames* I love it~ Pain is such a rush, don't you think~?? DON'T YOU JANE?!? *rips his knife from her stomach and stabs her leg*
*kicks the knife from him* YOU ARE SO CHILDISH!! *jumps on him*
Get off of me!! *throws her off of him*
*her eyes close as she flies through the air and then lands*
Wow Jane, you are really getting into this huh? *smiles manicly* Too bad I have to kill you
*her eyes snap open and she giggles with a hint of insanity* I know I am, Jeffery
*he trips her so she is laying on the ground, then he stabs her in the leg*
*laughs and lays there* poor Jeff... mommy doesn't think you're beautiful...
YOU SHUT YOUR GOD DAMN MOUTH YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING BITCH!!! *steps on her head hard enough so she is un-able to move*
*looks up at him and has tears in her eyes* but I think you are beautiful the way you are, Jeff...
W- what are you trying to do? Are you fucking with my mind?!
You're beautiful Jeff
*puts his knife up to her neck* dont mess with me Jane, you know damn well I can kill you in an instant!
*smiles* I'm serious, Jeff
Please... Dont kill me...
*tears flow from her eyes* please... i'm begging you Jeff...
S- stop those things that are going down your face! T- they... I...
*he kisses her*
*her eyes open wide as she drops her knife and kisses back*
*letting go of her gently, he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* it was nice knowing you, Jane.
I laughed harder than I should've.
awwwww- so cute that was just like enimies to lovebirds
Why just why?
awwwww... dats meeeaaan.
still awesome doe
still awesome doe
Dang man...it was so beautiful..but why the * he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* part?...poor Jane...oh well..
Well that was depressing.
Okay here's the deal I'm new to deviantart and I'm guessing that this was written via journal entry am I correct because I wish to write a fanfic
Dammit jeff! Wtf she loved u!!!!!!!
You killed the worst creepypasta...... THANK YOU!!!!
Ehh she get's what she gets. Don't mess with Jeff
tht stupid the last thing jane will do is kiss jeff and the last thing jeff will do is kill jane and not act insane
Haahahhahahahaha! DING DONG THE WICKED WITCH IS DEAD! *dances around the burning house*
damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no love
I like it bc it actually shows jeff's insane side along with a softer side for jane o3o
It was ok
WTF WHY AFTER THAT TOUCHING MOMENT JEFF KILLS JANE......WOW....WOW THATS JUST...WOW
Jeff you bitch she loved you
Noooo! Jane! *sobs* DAMN YOU JEFF DX FUUUUUUUU ieared up at this shit ;n; they're so perf tho <3 gah~
I may be a sick and twisted motherfucker but that.....that shit was just cold. I'm gonna steal his soul now bye. * Phases through door letting off maniacal later as he hunts Jeff down*
Woah..things were going great but JEFF!xD
WHY JEFF?!?!? WHY?!?!?
very good story
Please make more Jeff x Jane! X3
I just LUV this couple
Killer movie turns into Romance XD
Wtf loves a battle field alright.-.
I just LOOVE romance stories!
the ending was kind of crazy but cool story
That was soo good!
meow! luv ittttt
i love that grease head
its true but in the underworld me and Jeff.......me and Jeff are dating....
See my little brother finally got a girl and yes i killed hom he loved a girl i love so i killed him and ill see.u in hell jeff and i now your waiting
that was scary ps! read mine! you promised!
I just finshed reading Jeff VS jane the killer on CreepyPasta wiki it was good and your story was amazing :3
Wait... what...? Creepypasta wiki...?
no one commented on this? that sucks... allow me to comment: AWESOME, JUST AWESOME!
Thank you so much! My friend helped me write the first half but I wrote the rest myself. This isn't the actual finished product but it should be done soon!