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Jane
*lays on the makeshift bed staring into the night*

Jeff
*grins with blood dripping from his burnt away mouth* hehehe, I've got her now. *pours a bottle of alchohol on the side of her bedroom, pulls out a cigarette lighter and sets fire to the outside of Jane's bedroom*

Jane
*smells the smoke and walks out of the door of flames and grins at the morbid man* Do you really think fire is going to hurt me Jeffery? *pulls the knife from her hoodie pocket*

Jeff
I have tried every other damn thing! JUST DIE!!! *charges at her with his knife in his hand with burning rage in his eyes*

Jane
*rolls her eyes sarcastically and slides out of the way slicing down his pant leg*

Jeff
Agh! You little bitch! *slashes at her arm*

Jane
*the blade catches her sleeve to her hoodie and scratches* MY ONLY HOODIE?!? YOU ASS!! *charges him*

Jeff
*splashes blood in her eyes with his knife*

Jane
*her tongue slithers out and licks her eyes as she slashes the front of his hoodie*

Jeff
YOU WILL PAY!!! *charges at her and stabs her in the stomach*

Jane
*coughs up blood shoving him into the flames*

Jeff
*he stands there as if enjoying the flames* I love it~ Pain is such a rush, don't you think~?? DON'T YOU JANE?!? *rips his knife from her stomach and stabs her leg*

Jane
*kicks the knife from him* YOU ARE SO CHILDISH!! *jumps on him*

Jeff
Get off of me!! *throws her off of him*

Jane
*her eyes close as she flies through the air and then lands*

Jeff
Wow Jane, you are really getting into this huh? *smiles manicly* Too bad I have to kill you

Jane
*her eyes snap open and she giggles with a hint of insanity* I know I am, Jeffery

Jeff
*he trips her so she is laying on the ground, then he stabs her in the leg*

Jane
*laughs and lays there* poor Jeff... mommy doesn't think you're beautiful...

Jeff
YOU SHUT YOUR GOD DAMN MOUTH YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING BITCH!!! *steps on her head hard enough so she is un-able to move*

Jane
*looks up at him and has tears in her eyes* but I think you are beautiful the way you are, Jeff...

Jeff
W- what are you trying to do? Are you fucking with my mind?!

Jane
You're beautiful Jeff

Jeff
*puts his knife up to her neck* dont mess with me Jane, you know damn well I can kill you in an instant!

Jane
*smiles* I'm serious, Jeff

Jeff
Jane, I...

Jane
Please... Dont kill me...

Jeff
J- Jane...

Jane
*tears flow from her eyes* please... i'm begging you Jeff...

Jeff
S- stop those things that are going down your face! T- they... I...

Jane
Jeff...

Jeff
*he kisses her*

Jane
*her eyes open wide as she drops her knife and kisses back*

Jeff
*letting go of her gently, he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* it was nice knowing you, Jane.
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bluebadwolf Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  New member
Why just why?
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:iconalexandrieathekiller:
Jeff you asshat... *Heals and revives jane* HAHA!Game over Bonnie Emote - Five Nights At Freddys Game Over Chica emote - Five Nights At Freddys GaMe OvEr Emote - Five Nights At Freddys Freddy Fazbear Emote - Five Nights At Freddys Game Over Foxy Emote - Five Nights At Freddys  IF YOU TRY TO COME AFTER ME MY ROBOTS WILL KILL YOU JEFFERY!!!
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xXcreepypastaholicXx Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
awwwww... dats meeeaaan.


still awesome doe
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shewolf66 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Dang man...it was so beautiful..but why the * he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* part?...poor Jane...oh well..
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Jasonkills Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well that was depressing.
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Creeperqueen076 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Artist
Okay here's the deal I'm new to deviantart and I'm guessing that this was written via journal entry am I correct because I wish to write a fanfic
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derpyhooves301 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dammit jeff! Wtf she loved u!!!!!!!
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jean17540 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
You killed the worst creepypasta...... THANK YOU!!!!
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Happi1432 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Ehh she get's what she gets. Don't mess with Jeff 
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Zoeymonic Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
JEFF NOOOOOOO!!! Y U NO LIKE HER BACK?!?!?! SHE CANT DIE!!!! Y U NO MAKE BABIES?!?!? Facepalm :facepalm: Roma Facepalm :8Bfacepalm: My First Emoticon: Facepalm :facepalm: Facepalm Facepalm Facepalm :facepalm: Sanity is Overrated La Toast Extreme OMG Tard Hammer 
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