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Jane
*lays on the makeshift bed staring into the night*

Jeff
*grins with blood dripping from his burnt away mouth* hehehe, I've got her now. *pours a bottle of alchohol on the side of her bedroom, pulls out a cigarette lighter and sets fire to the outside of Jane's bedroom*

Jane
*smells the smoke and walks out of the door of flames and grins at the morbid man* Do you really think fire is going to hurt me Jeffery? *pulls the knife from her hoodie pocket*

Jeff
I have tried every other damn thing! JUST DIE!!! *charges at her with his knife in his hand with burning rage in his eyes*

Jane
*rolls her eyes sarcastically and slides out of the way slicing down his pant leg*

Jeff
Agh! You little bitch! *slashes at her arm*

Jane
*the blade catches her sleeve to her hoodie and scratches* MY ONLY HOODIE?!? YOU ASS!! *charges him*

Jeff
*splashes blood in her eyes with his knife*

Jane
*her tongue slithers out and licks her eyes as she slashes the front of his hoodie*

Jeff
YOU WILL PAY!!! *charges at her and stabs her in the stomach*

Jane
*coughs up blood shoving him into the flames*

Jeff
*he stands there as if enjoying the flames* I love it~ Pain is such a rush, don't you think~?? DON'T YOU JANE?!? *rips his knife from her stomach and stabs her leg*

Jane
*kicks the knife from him* YOU ARE SO CHILDISH!! *jumps on him*

Jeff
Get off of me!! *throws her off of him*

Jane
*her eyes close as she flies through the air and then lands*

Jeff
Wow Jane, you are really getting into this huh? *smiles manicly* Too bad I have to kill you

Jane
*her eyes snap open and she giggles with a hint of insanity* I know I am, Jeffery

Jeff
*he trips her so she is laying on the ground, then he stabs her in the leg*

Jane
*laughs and lays there* poor Jeff... mommy doesn't think you're beautiful...

Jeff
YOU SHUT YOUR GOD DAMN MOUTH YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING BITCH!!! *steps on her head hard enough so she is un-able to move*

Jane
*looks up at him and has tears in her eyes* but I think you are beautiful the way you are, Jeff...

Jeff
W- what are you trying to do? Are you fucking with my mind?!

Jane
You're beautiful Jeff

Jeff
*puts his knife up to her neck* dont mess with me Jane, you know damn well I can kill you in an instant!

Jane
*smiles* I'm serious, Jeff

Jeff
Jane, I...

Jane
Please... Dont kill me...

Jeff
J- Jane...

Jane
*tears flow from her eyes* please... i'm begging you Jeff...

Jeff
S- stop those things that are going down your face! T- they... I...

Jane
Jeff...

Jeff
*he kisses her*

Jane
*her eyes open wide as she drops her knife and kisses back*

Jeff
*letting go of her gently, he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* it was nice knowing you, Jane.
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Creeperqueen076 Apr 5, 2014  Student Artist
Okay here's the deal I'm new to deviantart and I'm guessing that this was written via journal entry am I correct because I wish to write a fanfic
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derpyhooves301 Mar 18, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dammit jeff! Wtf she loved u!!!!!!!
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:iconjean17540:
You killed the worst creepypasta...... THANK YOU!!!!
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:iconhappi1432:
Ehh she get's what she gets. Don't mess with Jeff 
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:iconzoeymonic:
JEFF NOOOOOOO!!! Y U NO LIKE HER BACK?!?!?! SHE CANT DIE!!!! Y U NO MAKE BABIES?!?!? Facepalm :facepalm: Roma Facepalm :8Bfacepalm: My First Emoticon: Facepalm :facepalm: Facepalm Facepalm Facepalm :facepalm: Sanity is Overrated La Toast Extreme OMG Tard Hammer 
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gothicgazgirl Dec 15, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
tht stupid the last thing jane will do is kiss jeff and the last thing jeff will do is kill jane and not act insane Roll Eyes Bored Yawn Sad dummy Dead (RIP) Nana, look what I have and you dont! Psychotic Headbang! EVIL Laughter! Hmm. Evil plotting in progress. Devilish Ashamed OMG! Confused Unimpressed 4 out of 5 dentists recommend brushing your teeth! Shocked 
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gothicgazgirl Dec 15, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
am so schoked stupid
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:iconcreepypotter:
Haahahhahahahaha! DING DONG THE WICKED WITCH IS DEAD! *dances around the burning house*
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asiabunny12 Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no love
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CreepyPastaIsMyLife2 Dec 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I like it bc it actually shows jeff's insane side along with a softer side for jane o3o
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