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Jane
*lays on the makeshift bed staring into the night*

Jeff
*grins with blood dripping from his burnt away mouth* hehehe, I've got her now. *pours a bottle of alchohol on the side of her bedroom, pulls out a cigarette lighter and sets fire to the outside of Jane's bedroom*

Jane
*smells the smoke and walks out of the door of flames and grins at the morbid man* Do you really think fire is going to hurt me Jeffery? *pulls the knife from her hoodie pocket*

Jeff
I have tried every other damn thing! JUST DIE!!! *charges at her with his knife in his hand with burning rage in his eyes*

Jane
*rolls her eyes sarcastically and slides out of the way slicing down his pant leg*

Jeff
Agh! You little bitch! *slashes at her arm*

Jane
*the blade catches her sleeve to her hoodie and scratches* MY ONLY HOODIE?!? YOU ASS!! *charges him*

Jeff
*splashes blood in her eyes with his knife*

Jane
*her tongue slithers out and licks her eyes as she slashes the front of his hoodie*

Jeff
YOU WILL PAY!!! *charges at her and stabs her in the stomach*

Jane
*coughs up blood shoving him into the flames*

Jeff
*he stands there as if enjoying the flames* I love it~ Pain is such a rush, don't you think~?? DON'T YOU JANE?!? *rips his knife from her stomach and stabs her leg*

Jane
*kicks the knife from him* YOU ARE SO CHILDISH!! *jumps on him*

Jeff
Get off of me!! *throws her off of him*

Jane
*her eyes close as she flies through the air and then lands*

Jeff
Wow Jane, you are really getting into this huh? *smiles manicly* Too bad I have to kill you

Jane
*her eyes snap open and she giggles with a hint of insanity* I know I am, Jeffery

Jeff
*he trips her so she is laying on the ground, then he stabs her in the leg*

Jane
*laughs and lays there* poor Jeff... mommy doesn't think you're beautiful...

Jeff
YOU SHUT YOUR GOD DAMN MOUTH YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING BITCH!!! *steps on her head hard enough so she is un-able to move*

Jane
*looks up at him and has tears in her eyes* but I think you are beautiful the way you are, Jeff...

Jeff
W- what are you trying to do? Are you fucking with my mind?!

Jane
You're beautiful Jeff

Jeff
*puts his knife up to her neck* dont mess with me Jane, you know damn well I can kill you in an instant!

Jane
*smiles* I'm serious, Jeff

Jeff
Jane, I...

Jane
Please... Dont kill me...

Jeff
J- Jane...

Jane
*tears flow from her eyes* please... i'm begging you Jeff...

Jeff
S- stop those things that are going down your face! T- they... I...

Jane
Jeff...

Jeff
*he kisses her*

Jane
*her eyes open wide as she drops her knife and kisses back*

Jeff
*letting go of her gently, he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* it was nice knowing you, Jane.
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:iconbluebadwolf:
bluebadwolf Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014
Why just why?
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:iconalexandrieathekiller:
Jeff you asshat... *Heals and revives jane* HAHA!Game over Bonnie Emote - Five Nights At Freddys Game Over Chica emote - Five Nights At Freddys GaMe OvEr Emote - Five Nights At Freddys Freddy Fazbear Emote - Five Nights At Freddys Game Over Foxy Emote - Five Nights At Freddys  IF YOU TRY TO COME AFTER ME MY ROBOTS WILL KILL YOU JEFFERY!!!
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xXcreepypastaholicXx Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
awwwww... dats meeeaaan.


still awesome doe
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shewolf66 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Dang man...it was so beautiful..but why the * he then grabs his knife quickly and stabs her neck* part?...poor Jane...oh well..
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:iconjasonkills:
Jasonkills Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well that was depressing.
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:iconcreeperqueen076:
Creeperqueen076 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Artist
Okay here's the deal I'm new to deviantart and I'm guessing that this was written via journal entry am I correct because I wish to write a fanfic
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:iconderpyhooves301:
derpyhooves301 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dammit jeff! Wtf she loved u!!!!!!!
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:iconjean17540:
jean17540 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
You killed the worst creepypasta...... THANK YOU!!!!
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:iconhappi1432:
Happi1432 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Ehh she get's what she gets. Don't mess with Jeff 
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:iconzoeymonic:
Zoeymonic Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
JEFF NOOOOOOO!!! Y U NO LIKE HER BACK?!?!?! SHE CANT DIE!!!! Y U NO MAKE BABIES?!?!? Facepalm :facepalm: Roma Facepalm :8Bfacepalm: My First Emoticon: Facepalm :facepalm: Facepalm Facepalm Facepalm :facepalm: Sanity is Overrated La Toast Extreme OMG Tard Hammer 
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gothicgazgirl Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
tht stupid the last thing jane will do is kiss jeff and the last thing jeff will do is kill jane and not act insane Roll Eyes Bored Yawn Sad dummy Dead (RIP) Nana, look what I have and you dont! Psychotic Headbang! EVIL Laughter! Hmm. Evil plotting in progress. Devilish Ashamed OMG! Confused Unimpressed 4 out of 5 dentists recommend brushing your teeth! Shocked 
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:icongothicgazgirl:
gothicgazgirl Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
am so schoked stupid
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:iconcreepypotter:
CreepyPotter Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
Haahahhahahahaha! DING DONG THE WICKED WITCH IS DEAD! *dances around the burning house*
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:iconasiabunny12:
asiabunny12 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no love
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:iconcreepypastaismylife2:
CreepyPastaIsMyLife2 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I like it bc it actually shows jeff's insane side along with a softer side for jane o3o
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:icondragoshadowing:
DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Writer
It was ok
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JeffWolf1 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WTF WHY AFTER THAT TOUCHING MOMENT JEFF KILLS JANE......WOW....WOW THATS JUST...WOW
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xXThe-WhispererXx Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Jeff you bitch she loved you
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:iconmaryalison42:
maryalison42 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Dammit Jeff!!!
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:iconserisleepswithsirens:
Noooo! Jane! *sobs* DAMN YOU JEFF DX FUUUUUUUU ieared up at this shit ;n; they're so perf tho <3 gah~
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:iconshadowlord124:
ShadowLord124 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Writer
I may be a sick and twisted motherfucker but that.....that shit was just cold. I'm gonna steal his soul now bye. * Phases through door letting off maniacal later as he hunts Jeff down*
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:iconichirukilover101:
Ichirukilover101 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
Woah..things were going great but JEFF!xD
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:iconppgrrbaddicted:
ppgrrbaddicted Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
WHY JEFF?!?!? WHY?!?!?
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:iconstfsmile:
STFSMILE Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
very good story
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:iconmr-war:
Mr-War Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Please make more Jeff x Jane! X3
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:icongenius-of-stupidity:
Genius-Of-Stupidity Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
I just LUV this couple
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:iconkillingkilledorbestu:
killingkilledorbestu Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Killer movie turns into Romance XD
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:iconpreciousswiftwind23:
PreciousSwiftwind23 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Wtf loves a battle field alright.-.
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:iconleveuvenoire:
LeVeuveNoire Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:flirty: I just LOOVE romance stories!
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:iconkobrakid12:
KobraKid12 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!
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:iconcutiebear01:
cutiebear01 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
the ending was kind of crazy but cool story
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:iconfaefriend3:
faefriend3 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That was soo good!
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:iconkarkat456:
karkat456 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
meow! luv ittttt
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:iconvriskaspiderbitch:
vriskaspiderbitch Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love that grease head
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:iconvriskaspiderbitch:
vriskaspiderbitch Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its true but in the underworld me and Jeff.......me and Jeff are dating....
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:iconirmightynoob:
irmightynoob Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
See my little brother finally got a girl and yes i killed hom he loved a girl i love so i killed him and ill see.u in hell jeff and i now your waiting
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:iconartmaster86:
ArtMaster86 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that was scary :( ps! read mine! you promised!
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:iconmrangrydog:
MrAngryDog Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
well-done. :)
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:icondeidara1fan:
Deidara1fan Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just finshed reading Jeff VS jane the killer on CreepyPasta wiki it was good and your story was amazing :3
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:iconrapt0r58:
Rapt0r58 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
Wait... what...? Creepypasta wiki...?
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:icondeidara1fan:
Deidara1fan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wasn't the link to their story o.o
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:iconrapt0r58:
Rapt0r58 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Uhm... I never posted anything on there but... BLAH IDK DX
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:iconmrangrydog:
MrAngryDog Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
no one commented on this? that sucks... allow me to comment: AWESOME, JUST AWESOME! :D
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:iconrapt0r58:
Rapt0r58 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
Thank you so much! My friend helped me write the first half but I wrote the rest myself. This isn't the actual finished product but it should be done soon!
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:iconmrangrydog:
MrAngryDog Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
i can't wait to see it! :D will you send me the link when you're done? B-)
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:iconrapt0r58:
Rapt0r58 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
I finished the update finally! Go ahead and read it!
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:iconmrangrydog:
MrAngryDog Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
very bitter-sweet, but, i forgot to tell you, Jane is a lesbian ;)
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:iconrapt0r58:
Rapt0r58 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Well whoops XD
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:iconmrangrydog:
MrAngryDog Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
it's cool. ^_^
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:iconrapt0r58:
Rapt0r58 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
Of course! I'm so glad you like it! ^_^
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